Compare and Contrast Essay 2/Second Draft
24.03.2014
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Housewives
and Working Women
Today, the number of working women is increasing with each
passing day a little more. To keep work life and home life balance for women is
more difficult than men because the world of women is more overcrowded than the
world of men. The reason for this is that daily works to be done at home should
be necessarily in a certain order. However, this varies depending
housewives or working women because both women have different responsibilities.
Housewives and working women differ in terms of the time they spend eating at
home, the financial opportunities they have and the time they spare to chores
such as cleaning the house and cooking cakes and cookies.
First, one of the differences between housewives and
working women is the time they spend eating at home. Working women usually
fudge the breakfast, but they necessarily want to drink tea or coffee; they are
unable to avoid looking at olive oil or salads for lunch; they take pot luck in
the evening. In contrast, housewives brew tea and they have a breakfast which
includes cheese, tomato, jam or what they want accompanied by television. There
is no choice for lunch, it is enough what they have at hand. But in the
evening, preferably they like to prepare the table with three types of meals.
Second, housewives and working women differ in terms of
financial assurance they have. Unlike housewives, working women have much
freedom of shopping. Although they do not need anything, they run to the stores
and do shopping. If they set their heart on buying something, they turn around
and finally put it into the bag. On the other hand, housewives get new clothes
for themselves only if they necessarily need. Housewives say ‘’ later ’’
even they really want something. Additionally, whereas working women have the
possibility to have their hair blow dried at least once a week, housewives are
their own hairdressers.
Third, housewives and working women are different from
each other in terms of the time they spare to do housework. There is a section,
which is a work life, required to allocate in the lives of working women. For
this work life, they have to get up every day at the same hour and attain
respectability in society. Therefore, it is clear that they cannot spend enough
time for home. They take a servant for cleaning, so they have washing washed
and have clothes ironed. Besides, they can make only one kind of cake and
cookie. By comparison, housewives may determine when to wake up. They
themselves do chores easily on a daily basis because they are in the house at
least five days of the week. Furthermore, they can cook all kinds of pastry.
Briefly, housewives and working women's lives differ from
each other in terms of diet patterns and times they follow, financial freedom
they have, and the time they spare to chores. Both sides of these differences
are the positive and negative sides. However, one of the most important
problems of working women is the requirement to spare less time for family
atmosphere. If especially they have a child who is waiting for them with a
great yearning at home, this is more difficult position. Finally, you may be a
working woman or a housewife; nevertheless, the most important thing to
remember is that you should not live obscure the concept of family.
OUTLINE
Thesis Statement: Housewives and working women differ in terms
of the time they spend eating at home, the financial opportunities they have
and the time they take to chores such as cleaning the house and cooking cakes
and cookies.
I.
The time they spend
eating at home
A. Working
women usually ward off the meals especially for breakfast.
B. Housewives
can eat the meals easily during the day.
II. The
financial opportunities
A. Working
women have much freedom of shopping.
B. Housewives
say ‘’ later ’’ even they really want something.
III. The
time they take to do housework
A. Working
women can make at least one kind cake and cookie.
B. Housewives
can cook all kinds of pastry.
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