Argumentative Essay 1 - First Draft
01.05.2014
Melike Büşra
SAĞIR
Should Schools Provide Moral Education for Youth?
Moral
education is enlightening and educating about which behaviors and values are
good and acceptable. Since it has a great impact on people's characteristic
features, they should be educated at an early age. Therefore, children require
education and guidance so that they can learn how to behave while coping with
the world. In my view, schools should provide moral education for youth,
providing them
with a feeling of decency and lawfulness, and instruction in value should not
be left just to parents because students are mostly shaped and ripened by
teachers.
First of
all, schools, universities, academies and similar institutions are training
facilities that shape and make think the human factor, and make them useful to
themselves, their family and their homeland. Schools try hard to educate them
on ethical theories so that they can make morally right decisions. Morality
overspreads every aspect of their lives. For instance, if a student arriving
late to class tells the truth to the teacher while specifying his or her
justification, this is a moral behavior. On the other hand, if what is good or
bad is not taught to students in schools, it reveals a deficiency in education
and teachers have difficulties in implementing their plans.
Even
though one of the most important goals for many parents is to teach their
children good morals, they may fail to reach to their goals. A major problem at
this point is that they do not act out according to the ethical principles of
right and wrong whereas emphasizing the importance of ethics. Hence, morality
becomes a word that has no meaning. There are some rules established by parents
like "Be good to others" or "Always tell the truth".
However, most of the time, they do not explain their children why those moral
rules are important.
In spite
of the fact that every family has certain moral rules, they may not be enough
and accurate for their children. Since education given at school reflects
common aspects of all families in society, it becomes a more valid moral
education. Besides, support of the school helps to resolve disagreements between
families and individuals. Teachers have a greater impact on students; therefore,
youth becomes much more conscious thanks to the education in school.
Finally,
we used to respect our elders, parents and teachers with love and politeness.
However, the youth of today have less discipline and right attitude. Although moral
education begins basically in the family and continues in school, while raising
their children, unfortunately some parents do not educate them attentively.
Thus, instruction in value should not be limited just in the family. Moral
education should become mandatory in all schools. By this means, moral values will
help youth to form their personalities and it will provide to be grown up
altruistic individuals.
1. schools, universities, academies and similar institutions are training facilities that shape and make think the human factor... (you should use another vocabulary instead of make think or You should check your sentence)
YanıtlaSil1) First of all, schools, universities, academies and similar institutions are training facilities that shape and make think(do you want to causative here?) the human factor, and make them useful to themselves, their family and their homeland.
YanıtlaSil2) Morality overspreads(missing prep.) every aspect of their lives.
1) There is an use of "make think" as in this example " The negative comments make think some of you need medication. " It has a causative meaning.
YanıtlaSil2) I couldn't get where required a prep. and what I need to do.
I mean "overspreads to every aspect..."
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